Wow! When I saw the title of your article I was like "oh, man, some egomaniac ladies' man is trying to disseminate his ladykilling advice. Yuck!" But I read it, with the intention of leaving a snarky comment,and I have none. This is a great article, and with a little tweaking, could apply to women for how to talk to men-- listen, pay attention, be open and honest.

I really appreciate that this isn't a "pick-up" guide; anyone willing to put in the work and sincere effort that following your advice takes will probably care about more than a one night stand. Great article, I look forward to reading Part 2.

P.S. Did your brother's luck ever improve? Good luck to him.